There was a 15 year old kid Dhruv. His parents were very demanding. Many parents are, but this case was different, both mom and dad were very strict with him. They keep him telling to get good percentages in exams all the time. Some most common things that cud be heard in that house was: “How come you always get so less percentage? Do you really want to study or should we take you out of that school? Just look at your friend Anish, he always get good percentages. This time he got 83% and you just scored 78%.” Most of the time his parents were harsh with him. Too much pressure on him every time. Even while eating food his father always taunted him. He was forced to study for about 4-5 hours daily. He was totally fed up of his life.
One day he was with Anish, both were flying kites but suddenly something came into Dhruv’s mind and he pushed Anish from the terrace and Anish died. People think it was just an accident and everything ended soon. Dhruv was afraid and guilty on what he did. Months passed away, everything was going fine, no mental pressure, no taunts, nothing for Dhruv now. Even the guilt inside him was no more. He was happy now and had many new friends. Time passed by and exams came, this time Dhruv was prepared so he was expecting very good result and he was having no tension as for now neither his mom nor his dad will scold him for less percentages(that was what he thought). Results were out and he got 81 %, he was very happy. But his father said “Just 81%, Mr. Sharma’s boy have scored 82.4%, learn something from him” and Dhruv was stunned and shocked. He now realized what had he done. He was in too much shock and he committed a suicide at the end, just to repent.
Two deaths took place in this story. Whom you think is the murderer?? Dhruv or someone else??
6 comments:
this is pretty dang good men! cant imagine u have this sense.. murderer? hehehe grades i guess!
but sometimes its true (glad my sis aint pushing me on terrace) hehehehe! cool!
the murderer i think is no one but the feelings and desires the characters were having....this is how we mess up our life......with no control on our desires
Akhand at dat age a kid dunno abt life and desire
its jus wat he see and wat he is forced to see or do
losing mental level is nowadayz common thing in dat dayz
recently many such cases can b seen :
Budhia isn't he forced by his parents to do all dis race n all ?
Jus look at his age man :O
does he deserve 2 do all dis at dis age ?
Do he know wat he provin or tryin 2 prove dis world ?
i think we all or rather every one gone through this peer pressure
the main murderer is both he and his parents bcoz his parent had wrong way to argue with him rather than comparing with someone else ,they should motivate him to score more marks next time and work hard..
and on the otherhand DHRUV is i think is mactured enough to understand what his parents taunt and feel that Anish is his friend and not to take his life after all he's 15 years old.
muah muah.....luv ya:)
EXPECTATIONS.........!!
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